User:Sethpedia/Cladding (fiber optics)/Taylorrnguyenn Peer Review

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 * Cladding (fiber optics)


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The article is neutral and the sources are up to date! The history and lead should be expanded more for a better understanding of the topic. I'm also curious as to if there are other modes or applicable equations for cladding. The layout is clear and well organized.