User:Seththrowgen/Operation Wetback/SamPopham00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Seththrowgen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Seththrowgen/Operation_Wetback?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Operation Wetback

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

The introduction of this edited article is a short description of the events in question. Could use more elaboration on the reasoning behind the operations, perhaps an overview of immigrants at the time and what they meant for the U.S.. Mentioned the violation of a previous agreement with the Mexican government, what was the agreement and how was it violated?

Content:

The information reviewed in this draft is bullet point style, no context or elaboration.

Good use of sources.

mainly just develop points and events in to a connected series of events that lead up to the main point of the article.

perhaps cite individuals or people in authority for these events.