User:SeulgiSua/sandbox

About Me
I am a first-year college student participating in a class that has an assignment where we learn about Wikipedia editing.

SDG 6

Test

Rationale
I chose to use the article Water supply and sanitation in Laos for my Wikipedia article edit project. Sustainable Development Goal 6 pertains to providing sustainable access to water and sanitation for everyone in the world. This article relates to SDG6 as it is concerned with the access to water and sanitation in the South-East Asian country of Laos. This is an important issue as many overlook South-East Asia and are unaware of the challenges the people there face, but their access to water and sanitation is just as important as people from other parts of the world. This is a good article to edit because it is a C-Class article, it is relatively brief, and is very general as it only has one section: Water and Sanitation.

Peer Review-Water supply and sanitation in Laos
The first thing I noticed was that the article only had three sections. I definitely have stumbled upon a few grammatical errors, for example, "However, as of today, there are approximately 1.9 million Lao population could not access to improved water supply.." and "However, Lao population has been meet healthy living standard." Please fix these before my head explodes. The lead is not too incredibly helpful in giving me a concise overview of what the article is about. The statistics used in the article, however, are very compelling (and heartbreaking). Also, the article is about sanitation, but there is not even a heading for sanitation? You definitely could find some scholarly resources and create that section in order to improve the overall strength of the article. Your group chose an article that definitely is perfect to edit and improve upon. Good luck!