User:Sewinginthepast

Art and World War II
Lead Section Layout Problems Content Problems
 * More intro than summary
 * Too much information
 * Not concise; doesn’t overview topic
 * Needs images
 * Only 1 citation
 * Page title not in first sentence
 * Link to WWII & art sooner
 * More encyclopedic
 * Sections are in confusing order
 * Suggested new sections:
 * Destruction of Art
 * War-Inspired Art
 * Artists in the War
 * Within new sections, there can be more accessible subsections (with info in current sections)
 * Original research/personal essay style needs to be altered (especially in first section)
 * Needs more images throughout article
 * Add more citations throughout
 * Style needs to be more neutral

Horrible Histories (book series)
Lead Problems Layout Problems Content Problems
 * Good lead overall
 * Last paragraph unnecessary (can be a section later on)
 * Needs info box
 * Not sure if the lists and lists of books is necessary for this specific article (separate page?)
 * Not enough subsections
 * Development & Approach sections could potentially be combined (Concept & Creation?)
 * New section about publication history (move Translations section & other content here)
 * Add Awards as a subsection in the Reception section
 * The excessive Reception section needs to be condensed.
 * Some copyediting required throughout – grammar, spelling, style, tone, and similar errors.
 * Original research/personal essay style & subjective tones need to be altered

Junie B. Jones
Lead Problems Layout Problems Content Problems
 * Needs more in the info box
 * Needs images
 * Needs more information in lead paragraph to be considered a summary
 * Too much time spent on character descriptions (new page for characters?)
 * Missing a number of sections on series creation, reception, publication history, etc.
 * Some copyediting required throughout – grammar, spelling, style, tone, and similar errors.
 * References need to be added in a majority of the character analyses.
 * Some excessive and unnecessary details need to be condensed.
 * More general info about the book series, in general, needs to be added.

Coffee Cake

 * Article flagged as needing more citations
 * Article needs to be verified
 * Article is lacking quite a bit of content

Bird Food

 * Article flagged as needing changes in tone
 * Article seems to casual
 * Article's layout needs to be reorganized