User:Sey2020/Psychology of social class/Nicgrana Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

user: Sey2020


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sey2020/Psychology_of_social_class?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychology of social class

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead paragraph is very concise. The information you added is neutral but it would probably be best if you expanded a bit on how different social classes react to mental illness. The content does have a very neutral tone. In general, the "social class and mental health" section needs to be expanded. It could also use some kind of images or media, but of course, that depends on the literature that is available. You are on the right track for improving this article for sure!