User:Sf23olso/Ginseng/Em09gatt Peer Review

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Sf23oslo, the context of this is well written. One thing to focus on the line with "Ginseng is often referred.." does not seem beneficial to the rest of the writing. Overall, this was great information to read and had good context for a few sentences


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