User:Sfatima 12/Comparison of bipolar disorder and schizophrenia/Aford4706 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sfatmina 12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sfatima 12/Comparison of bipolar disorder and schizophrenia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Comparison of bipolar disorder and schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The edits made to the Lead clarify and update a lot of the language used.
 * More information about the medication used could be added.
 * I'm not sure how much information would be found on it, but the article lacks information about marginalized demographics. This may be something worth looking into.
 * You include information about the treatment of these 2 disorders in the Lead, though this information should be similarly transcribed in the Treatment heading.
 * I think that a new heading of Biological Factors could be created, with Gray Matter and Neuropathological being changed into subheading beneath it.