User:Sfatima 12/Comparison of bipolar disorder and schizophrenia/Emiell490 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sfatima 12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sfatima%2012/Comparison_of_bipolar_disorder_and_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Comparison of bipolar disorder and schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- In the first sentence of the lead, the editor has changed it to be a comparison of bipolar and schizophrenia and their differences rather than how they relate. This provides a clear picture for what is to come later within the article.

- "T here are several prime causes of disability worldwide that are linked to Schizophrenia and Bipolar disorder" feels as if it is moving along to a different subject. Consider moving it elsewhere.

- Other than these factors, the lead is clear and concise.

Content

- The content of this article is great, however it seems to be lacking. Consider adding in some other subjects. My suggestions are: history, treatments, and signs/symptoms of each separately.

Tone and Balance

- The tone of this article is neutral. There is nothing leaning towards a certain side.

Sources and References

- All sources and references look correct. Links work correctly.

Organization

- Organization of this article is great. It is set up in such a way that each topic is very clear and simple, and is not overwhelming to read through.

Images and Media

- Consider adding more images to this article related to the topic. There is only one image. I would suggest different brain scans of each disorder, or photos of medications used to treat these disorders.

Overall

- The article feels like a great start to comparing bipolar and schizophrenia. However, it feels small. Adding in some more scientific information, such as differences in brain scans/shapes, neurochemistry, and more could be a great addition.