User:Sfatima 12/Comparison of bipolar disorder and schizophrenia/Hannahchaise Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sfatima12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sfatima%2012/Comparison_of_bipolar_disorder_and_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Comparison of bipolar disorder and schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Great job on your contributions!
 * The lead has been updated to reflect new content added, as well as added a strong and concise introductory sentence.
 * Content that has been added is extremely relevant to the topic.
 * None of the article seems biased in towards a specific position.
 * No grammatical or spelling errors, information is also well organized into a specific section.
 * The article, so far, has great flow and is easy to follow.
 * Only thing to notice would be the use of secondary literature instead of primary literature.