User:Sfh3/Amalia Kahana-Carmon/Rebecca Topper Peer Review

Hi Suzanne!

Good work on your article. : )

- You have a good opening line (though I think some of the formatting might have gone wonky)

- Your article is well-organized. I like the sections you used to separate your information. I especially like the section "Literary style and theme" which seems like a good idea (and which I might also create for my article now).

- I think you did a good job at writing in the wikipedia tone and writing a neutral article. Your tone in the "Life as a writer" section does seem a little different and I wonder if it's more closely linked to your source material.

- I would recommend shortening some of your sentences in the "Biography" section for clarity.

- It seems like your article is well-sourced (though I can't check the sources themselves -- but my article is the same way right now).