User:Sfoster33/Forensic Glass Analysis/Jsoumis Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing? Sfoster33


 * Link to draft you're reviewing Forensic glass analysis:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

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Not a lot of information is there I know, but what is there is good. Even in the existing wikipedia page, there is not a lot of work done. The only thing i could say is that you could seperate what you wrote in more that one section and expand on those topics like history and future work and research. Also but headings to help the readers know what you are talking about.