User:Sgarza99/Patricia Kitcher/Stephanie.garcia98 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sgarza99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sgarza99/Patricia Kitcher


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Patricia Kitcher

Evaluate the drafted changes
The beginning paragraph is good but the last sentence seems out of place. The last sentence that states "she is the author of multiple papers and two books" seems like it does not belong unless you continue to expand on what kind of books or the name of the books. Also in the exact sentence the word "multiple" is spelled incorrectly.