User:Sgcoggin/Poverty in the United States/Littlemissfeminist Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sgcoggin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sgcoggin/Poverty_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Poverty in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is strong and I would make the content in the first paragraph more concise or a little easier to read. The tone is neutral but there needs to be more character added to the article. It's a little difficult to read because there seems to be just the listing of information without anything that ties it together. All of the sources are relevant and reliable. The only changes I would only edit the tone and organization of the article to make it more seamless and easier to read.