User:Sgcoggin/Poverty in the United States/ZBron22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Sgcoggin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Reviewed the sandbox draft


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content you choose to add within the sections on Native Americans and LGBTQ+ folks will be a great addition to this Wiki article over all. It all appears to be neutral with your presentation of factual evidence. These two sections are especially important to the overall understanding of poverty in the United States, especially for these underrepresented groups, and does improve the overall article.

It might be interesting to include research on poverty specifically for trans women of color since they experience poverty in greater levels within the LGBTQ+ communities. This might be a good addition to the sections you've already included but I'm also not sure how much research there is on this subject.

Overall your work so far looks neutral and informational to the overall article. It is well organized and easy to read so there was no confusion on my part.