User:Sggeer/Waalian interglacial/Jdnorton Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sggeer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Waalian interglacial
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Waalian interglacial

Evaluate the drafted changes
The opening paragraph is great in that it includes a brief description in the entomology of the period name, as well as its order in the climate record. The integrated links to other wikipedia articles make this page very user friendly and easy to extend into nearby and/or relevant time periods.

The distinguishing features tab make well cited points that describe the uniqueness of the interglacial period in relation to others, including a variety of different proxies like pollen.

The references section is properly organized and all sources are cited correctly.

If there are any copyright free visuals that could be added, such as the geographic regions that were glaciated, it might be helpful to add one.

Overall, your additions to the article have greatly improved the detail and accessibility of the page! Great work.