User:Sgkimbrell/Estuary/Dallas.hooks Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AllyEsmond, Nadyagutierrez, Sallysir, Sgkimbrell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sgkimbrell/Estuary?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Estuary

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article was very well organized and accurately described the different effects of eutrophication in various aspects of the ocean including how it can affect humans. The subheadings accurately described the topics presented. Some changes that would improve this article would be to improve on the references as they do take you to the correct site, however, they could be tidied up to improve their quality. The overall structure of the article could be applied to my own article as it is very scattered and could use some improvement in organization. The article is composed in a way that attracts the reader to each section as they all correlate to each other. The article presents the information in a neutral way that only describes the information but does not try to persuade one way or another. The references in the article relate to appropriate sources such as journals and textbooks and does not rely heavily on self-published articles or blogs. The references are pulled from different sources and do not rely heavily on one or two articles but instead multiple sources. Overall, the presentation and quality of the article is very good and well put together.