User:Sgm123445/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Joseph Albo

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I was lead through a trail of categories and subcategories while looking for an article within studies related to Judaism. I could not find an article of interest from the initial list provided in the prompt about Zionism specifically. I eventually reached "Philosophers of Judaism," and selected the name "Joseph Albo" from the list after hovering and seeing that he wrote a piece of literature that is about the fundamentals of Judaism. I ultimately chose this article because it seemed interesting.

Evaluate the article
This article does not have much information, seemingly due to a lack of research existing in general on the topic.

The lead section of this article is very brief, but covers the key information of the article's topic. The lead section is concise, yet does not explicitly describe the sections of the article.

The article's content is relevant to the topic, however may be outdated since the most recent update, according to the Talk page, was in 2017. However, the subject of the article is long deceased, so the subject has not done anything of note. Since the article is short, it does not have heavy influence from any one group, resulting in it presenting information equitably.

This article is neutral with the possible exception of the third paragraph in the Biography section, those this may be solved with grammatical changes. The phrasing "creates the presumption" is confusing, since this is a general presumption and not attributed to a specific scholar. I think a citation of a peer-reviewed paper about Albo's use of medical illustrations would be beneficial. The citations are working. The first external link is a web archive, which prevents the link from easily becoming broken. There are only two citations, both from the same author. I think the article could benefit from more variety. However the external links help to offer a variety of sources. The lack of citations may be due to the nature of the subject of the article.

The only image on the page appears to be public domain.

The article is a part of multiple WikiProjects, so a bot rated "as start" in 2007. The other entry on the Talk page is a note on external link modifications, written by an Internet Archive bot.

Overall, this article is lacking and could use slight improvement when it comes to wording in the Biography section to alleviate possible confusion.