User:Sgs052901/Parral, Chihuahua/Historian11233 Peer Review

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The lead of the draft is very good and lead to the introduction and laying the foundation for the article. The article has a lot new updated information and new content added to it as well. The article takes a nice in depth look into the Enchiladas and Dulces de leche. The article also needs to some images that enhance the understanding of the article. The article is very balanced when talking about different content throughout the article. It was very organized and well written. The content that has been added has improved the article a lot and has made tremendous changes. The strengths of the content that was added was giving the article more diverse content and content that gives more information on the topic. The content can be improved by just keep finding more things to add this article that adds on to the topic.