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Article Evaluation
The article that I have chosen to recommend changes to explains only that school places a big tole on students with all the stress, along with the fact that disciplinary has always been something that teachers have always been put under pressure to control. The text does not however, include the reason for these issues. I feel that it needs to be explained, because it is an important and necessary topic to discuss and explain to many people. The talk page for the school article is negative and many people would like to make changes, others would also like to point out the importance of why school is so stressful to students! I am wanting to add the main reasons why a negative school environment has been placed upon the students - i.e. school and homework hours, curricula being taught, and such extreme policies along with the wishy washy ideas of conformity.

The Articles attempting to explain the stress school puts on students and the disciplinary requirements teachers have been put under pressure to take action upon. The text does not fully go into depth for the reasons of these subjects and what causes the main problems. It simply states that these are just simply  issues and have nothing to follow. I would like to add in the explanations for these topics into the Stress and Disciplinary titles of the School article. Following the statement about how students suffer from more sever stress than the teachers more often than not, I would explain why by adding in a statement explaining the corruption of the school system. Wouldn't you have stress through the roof if you had a 7 hour school day, hours upon hours of homework, difficult curricula that didn't interest you, and had to deal with unfair policies through out the school? Don;t forget to mention the extracurricular activities, work, home responsibilities, socialization, and enough sleep. This is what goes on through the education system. Schools want you to act like adults, but they do not treat you like ones. All of these issues have cause kids to lose their desire to even learn at all. I feel that these are all necessary to discuss in an article so that more people become aware.

The other Article I would like to add to is the one discussing teacher's disciplinary of the students. I feel it is important to remind people that this is stressful for teachers to have to enact certain policies on students that don't deserve a punishment. I would like to make sure people know that with the way that the educational institutions work, it has proven to be on a spectrum of too extreme, hypocritical, and unfair policies. In most schools, it is known that most faculty will take it upon themselves to favor certain students over others, and to decide whether or not they will be relieved of the consequences. These are all problems that need should be important to people because a students life revolves around school for many many years, and they should be learning things the correct way. The more people who bring attention to the issue, the sooner and more of a real fix can possibly come from it.