User:Shaanvi D/Quantum machine learning/Tkout2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shaanvi D, Rpaudel1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shaanvi%20D/Quantum_machine_learning?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Quantum machine learning

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

The lead has not been updated. The current lead is pretty decent with a good intro sentence and does have an overview of all the sections.

Content:

Yes, the content added is relevant and is mostly very recent, within the past few years. Some things I am not too certain fit in with the topic like NISQ circuits and variation quantum algorithms, but this might just be due to my lack of knowledge about the topic. I think it is difficult to deal with a historically marginalized group with this kind of science.

Tone and Balance:

Yes, the content is neutral and unbiased.

Sources:

The sources seem reliable from reputable peer-reviewed journals. Most of the sources are very recent, from within the past few years. There do not seem to be any random websites used, which is good.

Organization:

The content is clear with a sophisticated tone. There are grammatical errors throughout. The content is broken down into sections and subsections.

Images and Media:

None

New Articles:

Notability requirements well met. Many sources - over 30! Yes, follows patterns of other articles and includes many links to other articles.

Overall Impressions:

Definitely added a lot of content to the existing article! They did a good job finding information because the existing page is already pretty exhaustive. An area they can improve on is making sure the reader sees the connection with the main topic, like with the sections I mentioned in the content.