User:Shadrach agambila/Evaluate an Article

Apple Watch: (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apple_Watch)

I choose to evaluate this article because the device has improved the lifestyle of many individuals in areas of health, advance method of payment and fitness through software integration. Some of these applications are Apple Pay

To begin with, the article had an introductory sentence that clearly described its topic by stating the manufacturer, which is  iPhone, and the type of device in question which is a smartwatches. The article also included a brief description of the device by stating how the device works wirelessly by connection to an iPhone, newer models that independently connects to a mobile network. All information about the article are present in the introductory paragraph which included the watchOS that the device run on and all compatible iPhones they work with.

The article’s content is relevant to the topic because it focuses more about the device by emphasizing on the types of Apple watches and their release dates. The content of the article is up to date because it features all the Apple watches including the first generation of Apple Watch which was released on 24 April, 2015 it to the latest model of the watch popularly known as the series 5 which was announced on 10 September 2019.*** No content was missing with regards to the history of the device and all the content were relevant

The article was neutral because it basically talks about the device in question without mentioning of other similar brands such as the Fitbit Versa, and Android Wear. The article didn’t also compare the device with other smart watches neither did the article urges us to buy this watch over another brand. Also, there aren’t any claims that appear heavily biased towards a particular position and no viewpoints we’re over represented neither were they under represented. Again, the article does not in any way attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another

All facts in the article are backed up by reliable secondary source and all secondary sources reflected the available literature on the topic. All sources are current and all the links are working properly.

Furthermore, the article is well-written and self-explanatory and easily understood by every reader. No grammatical or spelling errors were present in the article and the article was well organized by being broken into sections such as the introductory paragraph, Development, unveiling and release, specifications, software and models

Also, the article includes images that enhance the understanding of the topic such as the first-generation Apple Watch with white sport band located at the top right of the article and more images at the bottom right. All images featured in the article were well captioned and all pictures adhere to Wikipedia’s copyright regulations. The images are also laid out in a visually appealing way to make capture the reader's attention.

Some of the conversation going on behind the scenes about how to represent the topic are the capabilities of the device where others emphasize that even though the article includes the development of software of each version, it does not include capabilities of the watch and all the applications used on the watch to make it more high-tech they we have to date. The article is a multiple WikiProject

The article is still underdeveloped and the recent changes made to the article was done by Drone Better on 13 October 2019. One of the major strengths of the article is that sources used in the articles are cited, allowing further investigation into the subject matter. The article can be improved by taking into consideration the contributions and opinions of users in the talk page when revision to the article is to be made.

The article is underdeveloped because new versions of the operating systems are being released which brings new features and functions to the device but the article fail to capture those changes.