User:Shae Chand/The Impact of Climate Change on the Agricultural Industry/VivianaOsorioDeJesus Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Viviana Osorio De Jesus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Shae Chand/The Impact of Climate Change on the Agricultural Industry
 * User:VivianaOsorioDeJesus/Pesticide Poisoning Children's Development
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A - making a new article
 * N/A - making a new article

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added so far is neutral and in an informative tone. The contents have no particular bias when discussing the topic. The introductory paragraph is a good length and serves property to introduce the reader to the topic at hand. I think it may be beneficial to add more background content in the introductory paragraph discussing what pesticide poisoning actually is and the reason it impacts chid development that will be later on discussed in the rest of the article.The article overall is does not contain any unnecessary content and is straight, simple to the point. The strengths of the article is in regards to structure. The structure is clear and from what is written in the introduction and subtopics of the main topic can be easily distinguished by the reader. Overall, I think that the article has a lot of potential.