User:Shafataryan/Agroecology in Latin America/McGSoc Peer Review

General info
Shafataryan
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shafataryan/Agroecology_in_Latin_America?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the first paragraph, the content flows well with the original Wiki post and there is continuity in regards to the history of agroecology. The additional information provides a better background on why agroecology is needed in Latin America and how sociopolitical structures exacerbate inequality that exists within. My only critique is that the first three sentences of the second paragraph could probably be more concise since it is a little repetitive. Other than that, it's all good to go!