User:Shafataryan/Agroecology in Latin America/Yaritzalopez Peer Review

General info
Shafataryan
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shafataryan/Agroecology in Latin America
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Agroecology in Latin America

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The lead sentence is clear, but it could also help to added a sentence that discusses the essence of Latin America's agroecological movement and its significance within the region's socio-political landscape.

The content provides a great overview of factors that influenced the development of these movements. The sources are also reliable and enhanced the credibility of the information added.

There are a few sentences that could be rephrased for clarity such as "Not only did this harm..." --> This not only harmed local systems and farmers but also led new Latin American economies to prioritize food production...

There could also be more specificity on the impact of neoliberal agricultural policies on local ecosystems or farmers to help the reader understand better.