User:Shafataryan/Urban horticulture/Yaritzalopez Peer Review

General info
Shafataryan
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shafataryan/Urban horticulture
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Urban horticulture :

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The lead is well written as it highlights the importance of horticulture in everyday life and its benefits. The content is up to date as it includes recent studies on the positive impact of contemporary trends and existing initiatives. The tone remains neutral and the information is backed up by reliable sources. There are a few sentences that could be rephrased just to enhance the clarity such as "According to various studies..." --> "Numerous studies have consistently shown..." Overall, the edits made strengthen the article.