User:Shainaw/Mobile Reporting/AnnMarie Desmond Peer Review

General info
Shainaw
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shainaw/Mobile Reporting
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mobile reporting

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

- Short and concise

- provides information that supports the importance of mobile reporting

Content:

- important content to include might be examples of mobile reporting. Inserting photos or links.

- I like how you included the advantages of mobile reporting as a neutral addition and not comparing it to traditional reporting.

- I would go into more detail or provide a link to what a content repurposing platform is. The language assumes all readers will understand it in this context.

Sources:

- I'm not sure if it is a requirement for the sources to be current but most are pretty dated.

- All sources seem relevant to the topic and follow Wikipedia's requirements.

Overall Impressions:

- This is a good start to an article on an important topic.

- definitely could be contributed to by other Wikipedia editors to provide more information and examples.

- Language is clear and neutral.