User:Shakedownstreet120/Pisa Griffin/Emily.850 Peer Review

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Shakedownstreet120
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shakedownstreet120/Pisa Griffin
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Pisa Griffin

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While I was reading the original article Pisa Griffin, I felt that it was definitely not as complete as it could have been. After reading what you have added to your article in the sandbox, I feel that the contributions you have made will really help to complete the article. One thing I would recommend that you do prior to uploading your edits to the article is proof reading and checking your grammar. There were a few parts in the sandbox that seemed a little confusing to me so you might just want to check over that but I think everything else looked great!