User:Shalibalba/Hadar, Ethiopia/Stephdc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shalibalba


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shalibalba/Hadar%2C_Ethiopia?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hadar, Ethiopia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The additional content that was provided improved the article by demonstrating more information by adding the geology of Hadar, Ethiopia, specimens and inferences as well. It can be improved by adding images to the new information.