User:ShanPitt/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Cold and heat adaptations in humans

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it touches in thermodynamics which I find interesting. Thermodynamics is usually looked at in objects and weather so it was interesting to understand how it effects humans and how we adapt to different climates, both hot and cold. My preliminary impression of it was that it was in-depth, concise and simple to understand.

Evaluate the article
The lead section contains a concise intro sentence and describes what the article is going to address. The content is generally up to date within the last 8 years and the content is applicable to the topic. The consent is bias free and has neutral tone. There is a length list of sources at the end of the article from reputable sources showing the viewer that the content is accurate and pulled from peer reviewed sources and not self-published sources. the article doesn't contain any images, graphs or tables which lacks in audience experience. The organization and layout of content makes sense and flows nicely. The talk page is lightly used for discussions but most discussions are from 2020 and up to date. Overall I think the article is well writen and to the point, I think it could be improved by including more pictures and graphs as well as advertising the talk page to increase discussion among readers.