User:ShanPitt/Uranium mining/JazChapman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ShanPitt


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ShanPitt/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Uranium mining

Lead
Lead section was not modified from original article. Could provide reference for lead sentence in the introduction and update it from 2019 to 2020 using a source such as:

https://www.world-nuclear.org/information-library/nuclear-fuel-cycle/mining-of-uranium/world-uranium-mining-production.aspx

Content
Added content helped to significantly develop "Igneous or hydrothermal" (H should be capitalized) and Breccia sections. Great explanation of what vein-type ores are. From source 2, this sentence is very hypothetical, to strengthen either consider adding more sources to support this.

Tone and Balance
Added content maintains neutrality throughout.

Sources and References
Sources are relevant, are appropriately used and add great content to the article. Make sure to tinker with getting the first three articles into one as they are all the same article. Can see that the link that will be added to terms for quick reference to the breccia pipe wiki, great set up, however I would suggest using original sources or using the sources that the breccia pipe wiki page uses rather than citing another wiki page which can be edited. I.e. for rock flour

Cunningham, C. G., Rasmussen, J. D., Steven, T. A., Rye, R. O., Rowley, P. D., Romberger, S. B., & Selverstone, J. (1998). Hydrothermal uranium deposits containing molybdenum and fluorite in the Marysvale volcanic field, west-central Utah. Mineralium Deposita, 33(5), 477-494.

https://link.springer.com/content/pdf/10.1007/s001260050164.pdf

Organization
Content is well written, easy to read, clear, and no grammar issue that I noticed. The sections that were developed well and provide a even overview of the topic and helps to balance these sub-sections within the original article.

Images and Media
No images or media were added.

Talk Page
Nothing on the user's sandbox talk page yet, though article talk pages mentions some content in the original article is plagiarized, concerns about mine locations is mentioned numerous times, and wanting content for uranium yields added. Something ShanPitt could add to the talk page would be to see if the community could help search for references on solidifying some of the speculated information on origins of vein-type deposits for uranium.

Overall Impressions
Great job adding content to sections with minimal information, liked the direction you went with it. Would suggest adding more reliable sources and formatting your references so it all matches properly.