User:Shanbelt/Hip hop feminism/Mlncnd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shanbelt


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 * User:Shanbelt/Hip hop feminism/Bibliography


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 * Hip hop feminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The only work I could find for this article is the Bibliography. They bring up points regarding ways hip hop artists are effecting feminism such as body positivity. This is a good idea that can show how hip hop and feminism connect. Using artists such as Megan the Stallion and Cardi B bring the Wikipedia article up to date and show that the article has been refreshed. Using examples of how they are different than the rappers that came before them show how they are changing hip hop. Something that could be explained more is the idea of the feminism movement. That idea is said yet not explained. That is such a broad idea that should be explored and explained regarding hip hop. Explain how feminism and hip hop connect and how these artists are using their talent in hip hop to help feminism.