User:ShaneRollins3/Quidditch/KenG732 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Quidditch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Quidditch&oldid=1018411854


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Quidditch

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The paragraph you made was well done and very informative. I cant say that I know much about harry potter but the article you made gave me good insight into the history of quidditch. The only things I'd touch up on is the grammar in some parts of this article. I made a google docs with the paragraph pasted in there with comments with fixes that you should make.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YgXjgL8CpEIF6q_QknWFF1STngDvE5WfnVocsfXd-K8/edit?usp=sharing