User:Shanelynch17/Empire of Liberty/CharlesHST Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shanelynch17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shanelynch17/Empire_of_Liberty?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Empire of Liberty

Evaluate the drafted changes (Peer Review)
Shane's article draft is very well written, and the information he provides is relevant to his topic, the Empire of Liberty. The information he provides is up to date and his research content is appropriate for his selected article. Shane's article also deals with Native Americans, one of Wikipedia's Equity gaps of underrepresented groups.

Shane's research is unbiased and neutral. His work is respectful of facts and does not attempt to sway the reader in any direction.

The source used by Shane for his research is reliable, relevant, and current. His source, a work by the scholar Richard Drinnon, is very well incorporated into his research and is properly cited throughout the text. His content accurately reflects his source and the link he provides to the source is working. While the sources he provides is reliable, he could improve his research by adding additional sources to accompany Richard Drinnon's work.

The content Shane provides is very well organized and concise, he accurately lays out his research and intended edits in an easy to read manner. There are minor punctual errors and one grammatical error in his writing.

The information provided by Shane would improve the article, Empire of Liberty. The strengths of his work lies in his research, his source, and his organization. His content can be improved by adding additional sources and through a proofreading. Overall, this is a very well written piece for his article and will be a welcome addition to Wikipedia.