User:Shannonscullion4/Benefits of physical activity/Wenyao123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shannonscullion4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shannonscullion4/Benefits_of_physical_activity?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article meets the requirements of Wikipedia and has sufficient source support. The content of the article is clear and organized. The article keeps a neutral point of view to analyze and show the main idea. The addition of resources makes the article richer and more complete.