User:ShantelleB/Onchidella binneyi/EM456 MB Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emadish and ShantelleB


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ochidella binneyi


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello,

I had already done some revising and left a message on the article's talk page before this process was explained, but again, it's looking pretty good! The organization is clear, there's a fair number of sources, and you've included some helpful links to other Wikipedia articles. There are some places where the writing could be cleaned up, however; many sentences throughout start with "they" or "this", so switching this up would help the article to flow better. Increased variation in sentence length would also help.

Well done! EM456 MB (talk) 22:36, 12 April 2021 (UTC)