User:Shaquile.oatmeal08/Ethnic stereotype/Mxf315 Peer Review

See "General info" and "Evaluate the drafted changes" sections below

General info
Shaquile.oatmeal08
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shaquile.oatmeal08/Ethnic stereotype - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ethnic stereotype - Wikipedia:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

- there is not a need for a prior description of the article's sections as the article is an incredibly small, sub 5 minute read, which I assume why one is not provided

Content:

- The content added is very concise, which is good for a short article

- The content added is both relevant and up to date

- I am surprised an article about ethic stereotypes did not have any mention already about African stereotypes, so this does address an "equity gap" in Wiki

Tone and balance:

- The info added is indeed neutral and makes no attempts to persuade the reader in any direction

- All the info presented was factual so no sides can be taken, only conclusions drawn

- There are no viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented

Sources and References

- There is a singular source, it is current and the link works for it

- Using the link, I was able to locate the information referred to in the article

Organization

- Spelling error in the second sentence, "Culture stereotyping is when categorise all members..." change to "Culture stereotyping is the categorization of all members..."

Overall impressions:

- Great choice of wiki article as the current article is very small

- Good addition of information and further clarification of what cultural stereotyping is, it gives a more clear and enhanced understanding of the definition