User:Sharkboy3/Mitella pentandra/Rshaporda Peer Review

General info
Sharkboy3
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sharkboy3/Mitella_pentandra/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mitella pentandra

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The Lead does include an introductory sentence. The sentence is concise and clear, but it is a little abrupt. Adding another bit of relevant information may contribute to a smoother transition between the Lead and the content. If my peer adds more information to the article, updating the Lead is an also a good idea. The Lead should touch on what the article will be about, so it is relevant and necessary to include an introduction to any information covered.

Content

There has not been any content added. The current content of the article is good, but there is a wide range of topics that can be covered. A few suggestions on information to add is uses of the plant, ideal cultivation conditions, dominant generation, more specific anatomy of the plant, fun facts about the plant, or a brief description/comparison of other species in the phyla. So far, there is no content that does not belong.

Tone and Balance

The tone of the article is neutral. It will be important to continue this trend throughout the rest of the article as information gets added. The tone of the current article is professional. Again, that is something that will need to be up-kept as more and more information is added.

Sources and References

So far, the article has only two references. For the amount of information present, these references suffice. As discussed previously, there will need to be references/sources added to support any additional information or claims that are made. A few good places to get started and find good sources are Google Scholar, the Whitworth Library website, and the Public Library of Science.

Organization

The content of the article is easy to read. There are no grammatical or spelling errors so far. It is broken up into categories with information pertaining to the category underneath each title, which helps break the article into small, manageable sections. As information is added, I think it is a good idea to keep this structure going. Bold titles for each category makes the article appear more organized and pleasing to the eye.

Images and Media

There is one picture on the side of page. It is a good idea to add a couple more pictures to embellish the article. A couple of ideas for pictures: adding a picture that is more zoomed in after discussing the anatomy of the plant, adding a picture of multiple Mitella pentandra's in the wild, adding a picture of Mitella pentandra blooming/bearing fruit.

Overall Impressions

The article that you chose is at a great place to get started on! There is a good skeleton with some relevant information and basic facts, and there is so much to choose from in regards to what you want to add. Just try to get started by adding information that you like little by little. Remember to cite your sources, and good luck! :)