User:Sharkiemare/Lauren B. Buckley/Megvdb4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

sharkiemare


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sharkiemare/Lauren B. Buckley


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has a good introductory sentence. Maybe add a fun bit of info about her that is not in the rest of your article. I would add a little bit about her TrEnCh project in the lead section. I love the info box about her and the picture is great.

Maybe expand upon her lab - it could even be its own section. Does the lab do anything cool? Maybe talk about big papers that have come out of the lab? Does she have graduate students?

What has she taught as a professor?

I think the research section is awesome. I saw she was one of the most influential climate scientists maybe add a little bit about this into the research section.

For the honors and awards section you should add a little description to the most interesting ones, for example the expertscape world expert one - explain why she got it.

Your citations look great. You could go through and maybe link a couple more things, like climate change, weather patterns, fitness etc.

Maybe explain what open-source means because not everyone will know how huge that is for accessibility.

A picture of the TrenchR could be an awesome photo op.