User:Shassan98/Keeanga-Yamahtta Taylor/Sarahkadhium Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Shassan98


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shassan98/Keeanga-Yamahtta_Taylor?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Keeanga-Yamahtta Taylor

Evaluate the drafted changes
Introduction: Although the introduction is well-written, I would include links to related topics in the post. While the material is well-organized, advocacy may benefit from more detail.

Content: After the introduction, adding more material, such as career and education, would be beneficial. The information is still current and important to the subject.

Tone and balance: overall tone is not bias.

Sources and references: paragraphs within selected publication need a secondary source citation. As well as the activism paragraph.

Organization: well structured and no grammatical errors.

Overall impression:

This is a very well article that only needs small revisions. Focus on incorporating links to important subjects. In addition, I'd  add a career and education section, which I see is already present on the original Wikipedia version. The section on selected publications is solid, but it lacks citations where they are needed. This article's material is excellent in general!

Great job!