User:Shaunbp/Cooking/Vivmm13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shaun


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cooking
 * Cooking

Evaluate the drafted changes
While it is difficult to see which edits were made by Shaun, overall this is a well written article. This article has a neutral tone throughout and there are many references for this article. The article provides images that give a good visual representation to what the article is discussing.