User:Shawn Sullivan Depaul/Non-compete clause/Rebraun17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shawn Sullivan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Shawn Sullivan Depaul/Non-compete clause
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Non-compete clause

Evaluate the drafted changes
-Lead: Yes, lead sentence includes what needs to be said about non-compete clauses in general before getting more specific by state.

-Content: Content is great. I would maybe simplify the first sentence. I understand it, but some Wiki users may not. The section does not address interest of justice, which was a question asked for this exercise, but I do not think it needs to.

-Tone: Tone is neutral.

-Sources: Source links work and are relevant. The topic is relatively new so I think the author did their best to find as many diverse sources as possible.

-Organization: This is good! It is well written. Just remember it is written for lay people so simplifying the writing is helpful but generally I have no more comments.