User:Shayna F/Kuru (disease)/Sarahlujoseph Peer Review

General info
Shayna F
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shayna F/Kuru (disease)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Kuru (disease)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content that was added to the article improves the overall quality of the article, as the content explains and addresses the testing and verification of kuru in a human. The attention to the EEG monitor also helps with understanding of verification of the disease. However, the explanation of the EEG may not need to be as in depth. Instead of focusing on how the EEG monitors it, it may be useful to focus on what wave complex intervals are present in kuru, or how the EEG verifies kuru without the comparison of CDJ (or if it is even possible to verify without comparison). Additionally, if needed, you might consider adding more about the means of testing kuru, and how it is done in earlier stages. If EEG is the only means of testing, you may consider specifying why EEG is the only technology that works at this time. Overall, the contented added was informative, and added strength and depth to the already existing article.