User:Shayna F/Kuru (disease)/Yogilover3 Peer Review

General info
Shayna F
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shayna F/Kuru (disease)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Kuru (disease)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead Section

The lead section is not the primary lead section for the article, so it doesn't give an overview on the Kuru disease. It's geared towards the verification of this disease and touches on symptoms and limitations of testing. The layout is clean and simple.

Content

The snippet talks a lot about how to diagnose Kuru using medical tests but doesn't provide much background on what Kuru is or how it affects people or communities. This information seems to be found in the primary article however. The content seems well written and informed. The language seems to be very technical though and could possibly be hard to read for some. This is a medical article so technical language seems appropriate.

Tone and Balance

The tone is neutral and sticks to the facts, which is great. However, the focus is heavily on the diagnosis part, and it might be better to have more information on other aspects of Kuru as well but this information is also included in the primary article.

Sources and References

The references seem to be current and from trusted sources. Which is a good sign of reliable information. There are many sources across the paragraphs to reinforce the information provided. This may be part of why the information feels more technical.

Bibliography

The Bibliography page seems incomplete. It's still showing the default template. I recommend you edit the page to include your Bibliography notes and References list. Please let me know if you have any questions on this, I'm happy to help.

Overall Impressions

This snippet does a good job explaining the verification process and limitations surrounding testing for the Kuru disease. In short, the article provides good information on diagnosing Kuru, but it could be improved by adding more information on the disease and simplifying the language a bit.