User:Shaynavali/sandbox

The information in this article is all relevant and completely valid, but there are a few things that I found could be improved.

One thing that was noticeably weak about this article was the lack of sources. There were only about 10 sources for the whole article, and a few were repeated several times. In addition, one of them was from the International Encyclopedia of Dance, which is an overall database that is not always the best source.

Another thing I noticed about this article was how a lot of the information was randomly assorted. It read as if the author took random facts from different sources and pieced them together into paragraphs, and sometimes they didn't necessarily touch on the same subject. This led to a disjointed flow of the article and leaving the impression that it was missing information.

Also, the talk page of the article only has a few comments, and the page itself has not been edited very many times. Therefore this is evidence that it can use some improvement.