User:Shayneras97/The Story of Alexander Graham Bell/Finn0018 Peer Review

General info

 * Overall, easy plot to follow. Didn't seem like a difficult movie to keep up with. Second to last sentence in the last paragraph is a little confusing. Not completely sure who "they" is. Could, in general, be reworded.
 * There are links to all actors, as well as the lawsuit mentioned.
 * Reception has quotes pertaining to movie and actors.
 * "Bell" needs to be capitalized in the second sentence. "Flew" instead of "fly" in the second sentence of the second paragraph. "Bell's" instead of "Bells" in the last sentence of the 7th paragraph.
 * Good job making the plot section easy to read. It was simple to keep up with :)

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