User:Shayshay29/Mobile security/MyMU797 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shayshay29


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Shayshay29/Mobile security


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mobile security

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead captures the topic to the understanding of the reader. Additional citations may be needed or the current pones re-positioned.

Content

The section covering “threats” needs to be updated as a large portion is bold and underlined. The text can be reorganized or reduced to make reading easier.

Another update is required for the section “Attacks based on Wi-Fi” and “Web browser.” A portion of the text is bold and underlined.

Additionally, the section “The three phases of malware attacks” can be reorganized to make reading easier.

The “effects of malware” diagram is in French, so it would be helpful to explain the different behaviors in English.

Additional citations are needed for the article, and if not available or found, the text can be removed.

Overall, the article covers relevant sub-topics and appears very well-thought-out.

Tone and Balance

The tone appears neutral and well-balanced, but some topics or explanations are best handled in other articles; hence it is recommended that more links be used.

Sources and References

With the work completed so far, the author has provided adequate references.

Organization

The article covers appropriate sections, but further streamlining will make it easier for readers.

Overall Impressions

The article covers a lot of good sub-topics and is well thought out. The author has considered vital points to include, but they are a lot, and some should be covered under related articles.