User:Shaywoodard/Ginger/Em09gatt Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Shaywoodard, the first thing i would do is actually formulate this into a paragraph. The information you have is good content. Overall, just add citations into the paragraph and create the paragraph.


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shaywoodard/Ginger?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)