User:Shelby672/Lower Walnut Focus/Dre Mitchell Peer Review

General info
(Shelby672)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Shelby672/Lower Walnut Focus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Positives


 * 1) Good introduction in lead paragraph
 * 2) Solid use of sources
 * 3) Lead paragraph talks about all of the topics to follow

Negatives


 * 1) Introduction could be longer if there is more to speak about
 * 2) Could use some images to help explanation of artifacts

Improvements


 * 1) Mention other main counties of there are more than just Cowley county
 * 2) Explain some definitions like "Great Settlement "
 * 3) Mention what some of the artifacts meant or what they were used for if possible