User:Shelby672/Lower Walnut Focus/MagalyGS Peer Review

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3 positive comments: I love how your references are listed as it shows a great variety of sources you have used for your page. I like the section of artifacts you listed and a description of how they appeared/found. I also like how descripive the archaeological sites section is, but you have a good page format and outline.

3 area of improvement/how to improve: In the location section, the first sentence feels like there is a continuation, so maybe just reword that sentence. For the location, you can also describe more of its scenery and even in the archaeological sites. Im not sure if other wiki pages have the + symbol, but if not maybe change that into more of a wording/description. If you can insert an image that would be good too !