User:Shelbydoingit/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Dieting        B, 55% complete
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article does not mention enough about the ketogenic diet for a page about dieting-- I have already compiled an edit history on this article as I was able to add some information for intermittent fasting under "low-calorie diets." More information needs to be added on the Ketogenic diet but it is locked as a "reference only to main article" portion. I will have to find something related.
 * This article does not mention enough about the ketogenic diet for a page about dieting-- I have already compiled an edit history on this article as I was able to add some information for intermittent fasting under "low-calorie diets." More information needs to be added on the Ketogenic diet but it is locked as a "reference only to main article" portion. I will have to find something related.


 * Sources
 * "Intermittent Fasting Slows Aging", The Intermittent Fasting Revolution, The MIT Press, 2022, retrieved 2022-09-26
 * Becker, Amanda; Gaballa, Dianna; Roslin, Mitchell; Gianos, Eugenia; Kane, Jamie (July 2021). "Novel Nutritional and Dietary Approaches to Weight Loss for the Prevention of Cardiovascular Disease: Ketogenic Diet, Intermittent Fasting, and Bariatric Surgery". Current Cardiology Reports. 23 (7): 85. doi:10.1007/s11886-021-01515-1. ISSN 1523-3782.
 * Gunst, J (August 1, 2021). "Role of Ketones, Ketogenic Diets and Intermittent Fasting in ICU". Current Opinion in Critical Care. Volume: 27 (4): Page(s): 385 – via UNM University Libraries.
 * Mattson, Mark Paul (2021). The intermittent fasting revolution : the science of optimizing health and enhancing performance. Cambridge, Massachusetts. ISBN 0-262-36816-1 . OCLC 1286684068
 * "Diabetes & DKA (Ketoacidosis) | ADA". diabetes.org. Retrieved 2022-09-26.
 * Das, Subrat; McCreary, Jordan; Shamim, Shariq; Kalayjian, Tro (October 2020). "Reversal of severe hypertriglyceridemia with intermittent fasting and a very-low-carbohydrate ketogenic diet: a case series". Current Opinion in Endocrinology, Diabetes & Obesity. 27 (5): 308–311. doi:10.1097/MED.0000000000000566. ISSN 1752-296X.

Option 2

 * Athleisure     S, 58% complete
 * Article Evaluation
 * A merging of Fitness Fashion article and an elimination of advertising reference sources (glamor, forbes, blog.trendstop) has been recommended for this article--so there is a claim that the article has not been written neutrally. There is a popular mini docuseries episode on Athleisure in Netflix, and athleisure is something I wear regularly (usually for the purpose of a workout during the day). The lack of scientific articles for this article have motivated me to consider editing it for a final project.
 * Sources
 * Hutchinson J. Normcore. Salem Press Encyclopedia. 2022. Accessed October 4, 2022. https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=ers&AN=156657914&site=eds-live&scope=site
 * Campbell J. Athleisure. Salem Press Encyclopedia. 2021. Accessed October 4, 2022. https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=ers&AN=137502095&site=eds-live&scope=site
 * Campbell J. Athleisure. Salem Press Encyclopedia. 2021. Accessed October 4, 2022. https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=ers&AN=137502095&site=eds-live&scope=site

Option 3

 * Pokémon Go!       B, 92% complete
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article contains a large amount of information on one of the most popular video game of the late 2010's-- Down to every intricacy! Awards it has won, how the game works, the issues with the parent company and development, etc. found a few studies on the UNM database outlining the physical and emotional dangers of Pokémon Go, strangely enough, compared to other video games.
 * Sources
 * Ping-Ling Chen, Chih-Wei Pai, "Evaluating the effects of smartphone racing games and other game types on pedestrian's risk-taking inclinations, Computers in Human Behavior." Volume 88, 2018, Pages 78-83, ISSN 0747-5632, Accessed 4 October 2022. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chb.2018.06.022.
 * Sources
 * Ping-Ling Chen, Chih-Wei Pai, "Evaluating the effects of smartphone racing games and other game types on pedestrian's risk-taking inclinations, Computers in Human Behavior." Volume 88, 2018, Pages 78-83, ISSN 0747-5632, Accessed 4 October 2022. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chb.2018.06.022.

Option 4

 * Sitting     S, 57% complete
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article speaks like an alien wrote it, about what sitting actually is (down to the bones we sit on), what sitting on different levels looks like, and different kinds of ritual sitting. I would like to add a portion about the Asian squat, or a kind of deep squat that in many countries of Asia is used as a way to sit during breaks, waiting, or smoking in the street. The Asian squat is important because it evenly distributes load across the leg muscles and some of the foot-- and Asian individuals, specifically, can go lower and longer in that position than Caucasian people. This can translate to increased capacity in weightlifting sports as well! I would also like to elaborate on their portion mentioning standing/treadmill desks in lieu of a traditional chair in the office/workplace.
 * This article speaks like an alien wrote it, about what sitting actually is (down to the bones we sit on), what sitting on different levels looks like, and different kinds of ritual sitting. I would like to add a portion about the Asian squat, or a kind of deep squat that in many countries of Asia is used as a way to sit during breaks, waiting, or smoking in the street. The Asian squat is important because it evenly distributes load across the leg muscles and some of the foot-- and Asian individuals, specifically, can go lower and longer in that position than Caucasian people. This can translate to increased capacity in weightlifting sports as well! I would also like to elaborate on their portion mentioning standing/treadmill desks in lieu of a traditional chair in the office/workplace.


 * Sources
 * Yichen Lu, et al. “A Comparative Study on Loadings of the Lower Extremity during Deep Squat in Asian and Caucasian Individuals via OpenSim Musculoskeletal Modelling.” BioMed Research International, vol. 2020, Jan. 2020. EBSCOhost, https://doi.org/10.1155/2020/7531719.
 * MacEwen, Brittany T., et al. “A Systematic Review of Standing and Treadmill Desks in the Workplace.” Preventive Medicine, vol. 70, Jan. 2015, pp. 50–58. EBSCOhost, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ypmed.2014.11.011.

Option 5

 * Anderson-Abruzzo Albuquerque International Hot Air Balloon Museum     S, 31% complete
 * Article Evaluation
 * In the spirit of the season and what I consider to be one of the most wonderfully crafted museum of the Southwest, I would like to add more information to this article about the local hot air balloon museum. The article is very brief, explaining its history, creation, notable projects, and donations to new exhibits. Although I may not be able to speak much from personal experience because of Wikipedia requirements, I want to find more quotations about the quality of exhibits, their inclusion of female history, spanish translations, and Troy Bradley-- a famous balloonist who has one of his most decorated balloon jackets there.
 * Sources
 * Lord Cultural Resources Planning and Management Inc, and Donnell Consultants Incorporated. Strategic Planning & Programming Study for the Anderson Abruzzo International Balloon Museum in Albuquerque, New Mexico. LORD Cultural Resources Planning & Management, 1993.
 * “Balloon Crew Launches from Japan in Bid to Reach North America, Hoping to Break 2 Key Records.” Canadian Press, The. EBSCOhost, https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=pwh&AN=MYO058839405415&site=eds-live&scope=site . Accessed 4 Oct. 2022.
 * “Anderson-Abruzzo Albuquerque Itnl. Balloon Museum.” Southwest Contractor, vol. 67, no. 12, Dec. 2006, p. 58. EBSCOhost, https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=edo&AN=23524627&site=eds-live&scope=site.
 * “Profile of Director Troy Bradley of Rainbow Ryders Hot Air Balloon Ride Co.” Plus Company Updates, 14 Jan. 2017. EBSCOhost, https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=edsggo&AN=edsgcl.477753202&site=eds-live&scope=site.
 * “Anderson-Abruzzo Albuquerque Itnl. Balloon Museum.” Southwest Contractor, vol. 67, no. 12, Dec. 2006, p. 58. EBSCOhost, https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=edo&AN=23524627&site=eds-live&scope=site.
 * “Profile of Director Troy Bradley of Rainbow Ryders Hot Air Balloon Ride Co.” Plus Company Updates, 14 Jan. 2017. EBSCOhost, https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=edsggo&AN=edsgcl.477753202&site=eds-live&scope=site.